Down the Rabbit Hole
-Alice loves pictures and conversations in books
-White rabbit ran by
-fell down the well
+could write a story and tell it as a man is falling down a well
-asked herself silly questions
+write about how he got there, what he would do if he lived
-tried the small golden key
+could write amelia bedelia style and take things literally
-drink me
-eat me
-talking nonsense
Advice from A Caterpillar
-"Who are YOU"
-strange poem about young and old
+write about a shrinking man
-pigeon thought she was serpent
Pig and Pepper
-livery or fish
+could get a strange package, wonder about it, benign
-pepper in the air
-strange poem
-baby pig
-met cheshire cat
-'we're all mad here'
-grin without a cat
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland
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Monday, October 31, 2016
Thursday, October 20, 2016
Story: The Invisible Giant
So, before you understand my story, you need to understand some things about me.
Firstly, I am a giant.
No, really, I'm massive. When I'm standing tall, I'm at least 7 feet taller than the Empire State Building.
Which I've never actually seen, by the way.
Secondly, I am invisible.
No, really, no one can see me. I've tried to get the attention of people my whole life, to let them know that I'm here to make their lives just a little more tolerable, but to no avail. No one has ever been able to see me.
That isn't to say that they haven't ever sensed me, though.
My whole life, I have wondered where I came from. Did I have a family, like these people that I have been desperately trying to get the attention of for so many years? Did I have a purpose?
I could let all this 'unknowing' make me sour and depressed, but I can't do that. I just can't.
Not when there are things to be done.
Have you ever wondered how you usually come this close to hitting squirrels, but always manage to stop in time?
That was me.
Have you ever wondered how sometime you have the perfect amount of change to buy that vending machine Coke for lunch?
That was also me.
Have you ever wondered how you can drop that iPhone onto concrete over and over again, and it only breaks one time out of ten?
That's not that $50 phone case that you ordered on Amazon. That's me.
Now the times that you do hit that poor squirrel, or the times that you don't have that extra 30 cents for that Coke, or when you crack your iPhone after you drop it on carpet, those times I'm helping someone else. I'm j trying to make things a little more fair around here.
I intervene in lives everyday, but I'm never noticed at all. I can tell you that without me, there is a lot more chaos in the world. Getting 'heads' on a coin flip actually doesn't have a probability of 1/2, by the way.
Sometimes, I like to swim the Pacific Ocean and intervene between the sharks and the minnows. Sometimes, for fun, I like to shave icebergs into snow cones. I like to go to Vegas on vacation, and make sure that some people roll their die just right. I like to make people and animals happy, really. Or, at least, make their lives less inconvenienced.
I'm not 'karma' or 'luck' or 'divine intervention' or anything like that. I'm just a regular dude. Kinda. Except for the 'giant' and 'invisible' thing. Whatever.
Anyway, I'm not telling you this for any praise from you. I just want you to know that, while I can't keep every minor inconvenience out of your life, I'm looking out for all of you.
Author's Note:
In the original story, Alice is an 'invisible' giant to the Red King, and she freaks him out when she lifts him up and puts him on a table.
Bibliography:
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
Firstly, I am a giant.
No, really, I'm massive. When I'm standing tall, I'm at least 7 feet taller than the Empire State Building.
Which I've never actually seen, by the way.
Secondly, I am invisible.
No, really, no one can see me. I've tried to get the attention of people my whole life, to let them know that I'm here to make their lives just a little more tolerable, but to no avail. No one has ever been able to see me.
That isn't to say that they haven't ever sensed me, though.
My whole life, I have wondered where I came from. Did I have a family, like these people that I have been desperately trying to get the attention of for so many years? Did I have a purpose?
I could let all this 'unknowing' make me sour and depressed, but I can't do that. I just can't.
Not when there are things to be done.
Have you ever wondered how you usually come this close to hitting squirrels, but always manage to stop in time?
That was me.
Have you ever wondered how sometime you have the perfect amount of change to buy that vending machine Coke for lunch?
That was also me.
Have you ever wondered how you can drop that iPhone onto concrete over and over again, and it only breaks one time out of ten?
That's not that $50 phone case that you ordered on Amazon. That's me.
Now the times that you do hit that poor squirrel, or the times that you don't have that extra 30 cents for that Coke, or when you crack your iPhone after you drop it on carpet, those times I'm helping someone else. I'm j trying to make things a little more fair around here.
I intervene in lives everyday, but I'm never noticed at all. I can tell you that without me, there is a lot more chaos in the world. Getting 'heads' on a coin flip actually doesn't have a probability of 1/2, by the way.
Sometimes, I like to swim the Pacific Ocean and intervene between the sharks and the minnows. Sometimes, for fun, I like to shave icebergs into snow cones. I like to go to Vegas on vacation, and make sure that some people roll their die just right. I like to make people and animals happy, really. Or, at least, make their lives less inconvenienced.
I'm not 'karma' or 'luck' or 'divine intervention' or anything like that. I'm just a regular dude. Kinda. Except for the 'giant' and 'invisible' thing. Whatever.
Anyway, I'm not telling you this for any praise from you. I just want you to know that, while I can't keep every minor inconvenience out of your life, I'm looking out for all of you.
Author's Note:
In the original story, Alice is an 'invisible' giant to the Red King, and she freaks him out when she lifts him up and puts him on a table.
Bibliography:
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
Reading B: Through the Looking Glass
My Own Invention
-Lion and Unicorn
-arguing over prisoner (red/white knight)
-battled
-knight's box to hold clothes and sandwiches
-box upside down
-bee hive
+story from a bee hive
-keep horse from being bit by a shark
-hair fastened on
-kept falling off
-get horse on wheels
-tells of invention ideas
-pudding courses
-golden crown on her head
Queen Alice
-encounters queen
-red and white
-speaking nonsense to her
-asking her addition/subtraction etc
-riddles with no answers
-sang a lullaby
-Alice stuck between them
-met a frog
-leg of Mutton
-poetry about fishes
Shaking and Waking
-caught/bought/cook/dish/sup/cover
un dish cover the fish or dishcover the riddle
-return thanks
-crazy scene/ crashing plates
-woke up and was talking to kitten
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
-Lion and Unicorn
-arguing over prisoner (red/white knight)
-battled
-knight's box to hold clothes and sandwiches
-box upside down
-bee hive
+story from a bee hive
-keep horse from being bit by a shark
-hair fastened on
-kept falling off
-get horse on wheels
-tells of invention ideas
-pudding courses
-golden crown on her head
Queen Alice
-encounters queen
-red and white
-speaking nonsense to her
-asking her addition/subtraction etc
-riddles with no answers
-sang a lullaby
-Alice stuck between them
-met a frog
-leg of Mutton
-poetry about fishes
Shaking and Waking
-caught/bought/cook/dish/sup/cover
un dish cover the fish or dishcover the riddle
-return thanks
-crazy scene/ crashing plates
-woke up and was talking to kitten
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
Reading A: Through the Looking Glass
Looking Glass House
-Alice telling stories to cats
+could tell stories to Cedie
-looking glass house
-sent into world
-looked at fire
-Red King and Queen
-invisible to the king
+write a story about an invisible giant that intervenes
-JABBERWOCKY backwards
Tweedledum and Tweedledee
-asked them for advice how to get out of forrest
-goofy characters
-shook both their hands at same time to not offend them
--
-Alice sympathetic to oysters
-tried to not wake up the red king
-question whether she was real or not
-white thing under tree= rattle
-fought over it
The Walrus and the Carpenter
-story interjected in Tdum and Tdee chapter
-long poem
-oysters
-ate all the oysters
Humpty Dumpty
-egg got larger and larger
-nursey rhyme
-he's in a book
-asked her age
-unbirthday
-broke down nonsensical poem
-left Humpty
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
-Alice telling stories to cats
+could tell stories to Cedie
-looking glass house
-sent into world
-looked at fire
-Red King and Queen
-invisible to the king
+write a story about an invisible giant that intervenes
-JABBERWOCKY backwards
Tweedledum and Tweedledee
-asked them for advice how to get out of forrest
-goofy characters
-shook both their hands at same time to not offend them
--
-Alice sympathetic to oysters
-tried to not wake up the red king
-question whether she was real or not
-white thing under tree= rattle
-fought over it
The Walrus and the Carpenter
-story interjected in Tdum and Tdee chapter
-long poem
-oysters
-ate all the oysters
Humpty Dumpty
-egg got larger and larger
-nursey rhyme
-he's in a book
-asked her age
-unbirthday
-broke down nonsensical poem
-left Humpty
From Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland.
Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Story Planning:
Source notes:
Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind
-fisherman, north wind, south wind
-Indian summer
-diver ignored warnings
+involve poems
-cooked fish, plentiful
-began to thaw North Wind
-wrestled, warmed up North Wind
-cheerfulness and courage overcome
I thought it would be cool to incorporate poems into my next story, as this story had done. I really like Native American culture, and I wanted to do something with their culture and their stories. In this story, Iagoo was an all-knowing storyteller, and I wanted to draw from this.
Research:
I found this on Iagoo- it's basically an adaptation of the original story. In this story, his name is Agoo. Here's a good description I found of him:
"AGOO, the story-teller of the Indians, is a little, old man with a face as black as the shell of the butternut and a body like a twisted stick. His eyes are twice as large as other men's, so that when a bird flies past him he sees twice as many feathers on it, and all the little colors underneath are bright to him. His ears are twice as large as other men's, so that what seems to them but a tiny sound is to him like the roll of thunder. His legs are supple and his arms are strong, so that he can run faster and further, and can lift and carry twice as much as others."
This story is from the Ojibwe. They have one of the largest Native American populations, and they live in Canada and the United States. They have a very rich culture, especially in their music, art, and literature.
Styles:
I could do strictly poems for this story
+ creative, challenge me
- hard to fit certain aspects into this story, might be hard to reach word limit
Write this from Iagoo's perspective, how he learned these things
+ Could be very adventurous
- Ive done this before
Character Sketches:
Iagoo- wants to tell of his travels and his journies, great story teller
Children- want to soak up everything he teaches, entertainment
Final Paragraph:
And that my children, is how it all went.
Now I must go to bed, for I am surely spent.
I hope that I have answered all of your questions,
I am ready for tomorrow, for our next story session.
Yes, I have traveled far, and seen a lot,
I will tell my stories, so it won't be for naught.
Writing Goals:
I want to expand on my ideas even more. I would also like to further develop my characters, and make them more relatable to the readers.
Monday, October 17, 2016
Reading B: American Indian Fairy Tales
The Boy who Snared the Sun
-during winter, Iagoo's teepee still warm
-Dormouse
-people were vegitarians
-stole fire
-Mastodon largest animal
-mischief from little brother
-killed birds, made coat
-sun ruined coat, devised plan to get back at sun
-noosed the sun
-Dormouse set the sun free, died in process
How the Summer Came
-North Wind
-Fisher brought summer down from sky
-son shown same hunting promise
-sun is roof and floor
-grandfather is squirrel
-father (manito) attempt to bring down summer
-took turns jumping into sky
-he is now constellation
The Fairy Bride
-Indian daughter that lived on Lake Superior
-pranks
-Sang a song
-Happy Land
-wants to follow heart
-had to marry man she didnt love
-fairy Evergreen vanished
Bibliography:
From "American Indian Fairy Tales" by Henry Schoolcraft.
-during winter, Iagoo's teepee still warm
-Dormouse
-people were vegitarians
-stole fire
-Mastodon largest animal
-mischief from little brother
-killed birds, made coat
-sun ruined coat, devised plan to get back at sun
-noosed the sun
-Dormouse set the sun free, died in process
The Mastodon
How the Summer Came
-North Wind
-Fisher brought summer down from sky
-son shown same hunting promise
-sun is roof and floor
-grandfather is squirrel
-father (manito) attempt to bring down summer
-took turns jumping into sky
-he is now constellation
The Fairy Bride
-Indian daughter that lived on Lake Superior
-pranks
-Sang a song
-Happy Land
-wants to follow heart
-had to marry man she didnt love
-fairy Evergreen vanished
Bibliography:
From "American Indian Fairy Tales" by Henry Schoolcraft.
Reading A: American Indian Fairy Tales
Iagoo, the Story Teller
+could include an all-knowing character, tells stories
-children big fan of him and his stories
Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind
-fisherman, north wind, south wind
-Indian summer
-diver ignored warnings
+involve poems
-cooked fish, plentiful
-began to thaw North Wind
-wrestled, warmed up North Wind
-cheerfulness and courage overcome
The Little Boy and Girl in the Clouds
-iagoo is very patient with children
-story passed down
-animals and men friendly terms
-animals run free
-Jack Rabbit
-river
-climbed up mossy rock, fell asleep
-rock rose while they slept
-looked for children
-coyote finds them
-cant figure out how to get to them
-measuring worm
-patience and perseverance, rescued them
+write about a measly character that overcomes
The Child of the Evening Star
-brought presents to father
-final daughter
-hard to please
-heart, not face
-evil spell cast on Osseo
-descended from evening star
-broken spell
-but girl now cursed
-still in love w her
-beauty restored
-everyone turned to birds
-magician
-flew away
Bibliography:
From "American Indian Fairy Tales" by Henry Schoolcraft.
+could include an all-knowing character, tells stories
-children big fan of him and his stories
The North Wind
Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind
-fisherman, north wind, south wind
-Indian summer
-diver ignored warnings
+involve poems
-cooked fish, plentiful
-began to thaw North Wind
-wrestled, warmed up North Wind
-cheerfulness and courage overcome
The Little Boy and Girl in the Clouds
-iagoo is very patient with children
-story passed down
-animals and men friendly terms
-animals run free
-Jack Rabbit
-river
-climbed up mossy rock, fell asleep
-rock rose while they slept
-looked for children
-coyote finds them
-cant figure out how to get to them
-measuring worm
-patience and perseverance, rescued them
+write about a measly character that overcomes
The Child of the Evening Star
-brought presents to father
-final daughter
-hard to please
-heart, not face
-evil spell cast on Osseo
-descended from evening star
-broken spell
-but girl now cursed
-still in love w her
-beauty restored
-everyone turned to birds
-magician
-flew away
Bibliography:
From "American Indian Fairy Tales" by Henry Schoolcraft.
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